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"You will pay for that " said Karai

"Bring it on" I said

* The Foot Ninjas that are with Karai attack us we start fighting I slice some heads off one of the ninjas throws a bladed weapon I turn round and throw the machete it goes into his head, Karai throws me over the rooftop I grab hold of the edge Karai puts her foot on my hand

"Say good-bye to your friend Leonardo" she said and starts crushing my hand

"I wouldn't be so sure about that good-bye" I said

* I threw a type of grenade called a Flashbang onto the roof

"Sheild your Eyes" I shouted

"They cover their eyes as it goes of blinding Karai. She runs off Leo and Don put their hands down and pull me back up onto the roof

"Thanks guys I owe you one" I said

"Don't mention it Grant we're friends aren't we" said Leo

"Yeah we are " I replied catcing my breath

We got back to the guys lair and as soon as we got in I sat down rubbing my leg

"What's wrong Grant?" asked Don

"I think one of the Ninja dudes scratched my leg with a bladed weapon" I replied

* He looks at the wound and sees the bladed weapon stuck in my leg,Don grabs a first aid kit and applys pressure and carefully pulls out the blade

"Ow man that hurt" I said in pain

"Sorry about that" said Don wrapping the wound with a bandage

"What was it anyway?" I asked

"I think it's a kunai looks like the top part snapped in half" he replied

*Leo,Raph and Mikey walk over and see the wound

"Dude that was cool you took out those Foot Ninjas in seconds with those what are they called" asked Mikey

"Sawn-Off Shotguns easy to use hold that though" I said unloading all the guns

"Making sure no accidents happen" said Leo

"Yeah I don't want anyone getting hurt with a gun" I said

"You were good I have never seen anyone take on the Foot like that you were really agressive out there" said Raph

"Thanks I was angry when they attacked so why not fight back" I said smiling

"I have to admit your accuracy was helpful" said Leo

"Well like I said so far I've never missed and I'm going to keep it that way" I said

"How did you learn how to shoot a gun" asked Raph

"Too much video games to be honest but like you heard when I was talking to Nick he was being robbed I grabbed a Glock 17 shot them in the head they were dea before they knew so me" I replied smiling

"Wow" said the Turtles

"Yeah I enjoyed fighting and I won't back down not any more" I said

"You okay?" asked Leo

"Yeah I need to make the Purple Dragons pay with their lives" I said

"Grant taking revenge won't make things better " said Leo

"Leonardo is right Grant taking revenge will might make things worse" said Master Splinter

* I sigh*

"Look I know you guys are worried but I'll take care of this to make The Purple Dragons pay" I said sounding angry

"And I call you grouchy" said Mikey

"Mikey not a good idea to say that" said Raph

* I lie down on the couch and close my eyes ignoring everyone around me

"Grant..." said Don

"I'm fine I'm just tired and I need some sleep I'll talk tomorrow" I said

They headed to bed I tried sleeping after everything that happened that night I couldn't stop feeling angry at the Purple Dragons wanting them to suffer a horrible fate and I woas going to make sure I was the one to cause it

End of Part 3

Part 4 Revenge

I spent a while with the turtles it was September 31st and I spent restless nights thinking about what happened with the Purple Dragons blowing up my home destroying everything I own I decided to take the problem into my hands

"Grant what are you doing" asked a tired Raph

"Nothing Raph I need some fresh air" I replied

"What with knives" he said

"It's none of your business Raph" I said sounding angry

"Don't get angry with me wait your going to take on the Purple Dragons aren't you" Raph shouted

"So what Raph they need to be taught a lesson and I will be the one to do it I know who they are the ones that blew up my house" I shouted

"Sorry Grant but you aren't going out I have to tell someone" he said

* He turns his back I look at the bottom of my shotgun*

"Sorry to do this Raph" I said

"Sorry for what?" he asked

* I hit him in the back of the head with the gun*

"Nothing personal Raph but this is what I need to do" I said staring at the knocked out Raph

I ran out and started hunting the ones that I was going to hurt. I managed to grab those Purple Dragons that destroyed everything and I knew the only way I would feel happy is by taking them out I wore a mask so they couldn't see my face but I would revele who I was when I was ready

"Who are you" said The captured Purple Dragons

"Someone you wish you hadn't messed with" I said

"What do you want with us" asked one of the Purple Dragons

"You hurt me I hurt you well more than hurt" I replied

Back at the turtles lair Raph came too and woke his brothers up and told them what I was doing

"I can't believe Grant would do that" said Mikey

"I could show you the mark on my head Mikey" said Raph

"We have to go find Grant before he does something he might regret" said Leo

"I'll tell Casey he might have seen Grant" said Don

Meanwhile I was tourtering the Purple Dragons making them suffer I had snapped lost it I wanted to make sure they were hurt bad even if I killed one or two of them I had no clue that Casey,Leo,Raph,Don and Mikey were watching me until they broke the door down

"Why are you guys here" I said sounding angry

"Grant what are you doing" asked Leo

"Getting revenge" I replied

* I pull out a big knife and turn to the upside down Purple Dragon and I cut him across the arm*

"Grant you've lost it don't kill any of them things will get worse if you do" said Raph

"Maybe they deserve it" I shouted

"Grant we don't want to hurt you but if you won't listen then we will have to" said Leo

"You think you can take me" I replied

* We started fighting until Leo tripped me up and Casey pinned me to the ground using his Hockey Sticks

"Grant snap out of it I know what it's like holding a gurdge against the Purple Dragons but your better than them" said Casey

"I'm sorry guys I just couldn't take it knowing they were here" I said looking down at the ground

* Casey helps me up I look at the others and rub my neck

"Sorry again guys can we try to forget this night happened" I said

"Sounds good to me" said Leo

"What you start something and you aren't going to finish looser" shouted a Purple Dragon

* I start laughing and I draw a big knife

"Grant don't" shouted Don

* I cut the rope and the Purple Dragons fall onto the ground*

"I could have killed you but I didn't I'm diferent from you lot" I said turning my back

"Your weak that's what you are" said a Purple Dragon

*I keep walking he picks up a plank of wood that has a nail through it and runs at me, I stab him in the hand with the knife and kick him into the other Purple Dragons

"I won't kill you but I will send you to the hospital with broken bones got that" I shouted

* They run off *

"You okay Grant" asked Mikey

"I am a bit better than before thanks" I replied

"Where do you think your going" said a Purple Dragon

"Away from the likes of you" I replied

"No your not you have to pay for what you did" he replied

"Your going to wish you had ran away" I said while dropping my bag of weapons onto the ground

"Yeah right" he replied

* They grab baseball bats,I draw a knife,they run at me I slit his throat he grabs it in pain as he dies another grabs me I grab his neck and snap it another few charge at me I plunge the knife into one of them and slice upwards until his organs fall out I then stab the others in the head*

"That was your own fault I gave you the chance to run and you didn't I warned you Purple Dragon scum" I said

* I walk over to the one remaining Purple Dragon*

"Grant don't you've already done enough" shouted Don

"Whatever Donny" I replied

* I turn my back and the Purple dragon grabs a plank of wood with a nail in it I turn round with a machete drawn and slice of his hand he falls down holding his*

"Now you run or I finish what I started" I said angrily

* He gets up and runs off holding where his hand was*

"Grant............" the Turtles and Casey said looking at me

"I warned them yet the decided to attack that was there mistake not mine" I shouted

"Grant cool it" said Casey

* I stood staring at the corpses for a minute*

"We have to leave" said Raph

"One minute Raph" I said

"Fine do what you need to then we have to get going" he said

* I took the bodies and hung them upside down and I write a message in blood saying " Next Time Its Your Blood Hun"

"Grant have lost your mind" said Mikey

"What because I'm taking them out for good" I said

"Grant snap out of it you've done enough" said Leo

"Why should I huh Leo maybe I should finish what I just started" I shouted

* I look around at the corpses, Raph walks behind me and taps me on the shoulder*

"Grant.." said an angry sounding Raph

"What Raph" I shouted

* I turn round and he punches me in the face knocking me out*

"Sorry about that" he said rubbing his knuckles

"Come on we'll take him home and if we need to tie him up until he cools it" said Leo

They carried me back to the lair and tied my hands up I admit I was out of control that night but my rage took over I was so angry that happened but I probably should have been a bit calmer about the full thing man I felt like an idiot

"He's waking up" said Leo

"What why did you tie my hands up" I said

"You went insane back at the warehouse" said Raph

"I snapped sorry someone untie my hands" I said

* Leo cuts the rope*

"Your going to have to learn to control the anger Grant espcially after the damage you done" said Leo looking at me

" I didn't mean to go over board it was supposed to be a warning at least some of them have paid" i said rubbing my wrists

"Oh you did leave a warning in blood" said Raph

"Great I really went overboard" I said

"Grant has this ever happened to you before" asked Don

"What the anger thing no not like that it didn't" I replied standing up

"Maybe the whole thing with the Purple Dragons made you snap like that" said Mikey

"He's right I've seen anger like Leatherhead but you were just as angry as him Grant" said Don

"It's hard for me to let go of that" I said

"I found out that your birthday's tomorrow by accident I was looking at your laptop because you were having problems and a message opened saying Happy 18th Birthday and tomorrow's date" said Don

"Yeah Happy Birthday to me" I said sarcastically

"Grant what are you doing" asked Raph

"I'm gonna practice with a couple Butterfly Knives I'm not exactly in the mood to talk" I replied

I spent 7 hours practicing with the Butterfly Knives not saying a word to anyone

"Is he still going" asked Casey

"Yeah 7 hours he's been at it" Raph replied


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 Post subject: Re: [M] United By Fate
PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 5:57 pm 
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Ugh, gruesome stuff you have here! :P I'm ready for more :wink: :mrgreen:


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 Post subject: Re: [M] United By Fate
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lol Thanks Kyle I have WAY more stuff


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 Post subject: Re: [M] United By Fate
PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:01 pm 
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:P Awesome, I'll make a point to not forget to read it this time :roll:


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 Post subject: Re: [M] United By Fate
PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:04 pm 
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i GOT YOU HOOKED


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 Post subject: Re: [M] United By Fate
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Yeah, yeah, just keep writing it :P


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 Post subject: Re: [M] United By Fate
PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:06 pm 
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Will do :P


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 Post subject: Re: [M] United By Fate
PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:40 pm 
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Continued from above

"Man has he stopped?" asked Casey

"Nope been going all out with training" Raph replied

* Leo and the others decided to watch the TV when a news report suddenly came on

The Reporter said that something was attacking the City she described the attackers as Dinosaur looking the guys knew it straight away

"Triceratons again I thought we saw the last of them" said Mikey

"What are they" I asked

"Look who decided to take a break" said Raph

"I figured better than arguing with everyone" I said cracking my fingers

"Triceratons are dangerous Aliens that will destroy everything to find what they are looking for" said Don

"Let me guess you don't know why they're here" I said

"Exactly" said Don

"Let's go then and give them a reason to leave" I said grabbing my weapons

We ran outside the City was in carnage I thought it couldn't get worse until I saw The Triceratons up close my guns agains't blasters yeah that was gonna go down well but I decided to fight them

"Grant these guys are dangerous your guns aren't enough to do anything to them" said Casey

"I know but it's gonna be fun finding out" I said loading a gun

"Your insane if you try taking them on like this" said Raph

"I know but it'll be interesting" I said

* A group of Triceratons come towards us

"Step aside human" said a Triceraton

"Make me" I replied

"Grant not the best idea to annoy them" said Mikey

"Trust me I know what I'm doing" I said drawing a handgun from behind my back

"I said step aside human" said the Triceraton

* The Triceraton grabs my arm I smirk and throw it over my Shoulder *

"Woah did he just do that" said Mikey

"Umm yeah I think he did and he did it so easily" said Don

"Get Him!!" shouted the Triceraton

"Grant I hope you have a plan because take a look at that" said Raph

* I look over and see a Triceraton carrying a giant axe

"Another one oh and look he's got a giant axe this'll be fun" I said

"Grant what are you doing" asked Casey

"i'm taking out these guys then the Axe Man over there" I said

* I walk forward towards the Triceratons, Two of them try to attack me I head-butt them and kick them flying, I keep them at bay with the guys*

"Grant look out" shouted Raph

* I see a Triceraton point it's blaster at me I backflip a good few feet away I pull out a Butterfly knife and throw it into the Triceraton's head killing him*

"Well that was fun" I said turning my head to the one with the giant axe as he goes after Leo and the others

"Man this guy doesn't give up" said Mikey

"Grant what are you doing" asked Casey

* I draw a handgun out and fire it at the Triceraton until I run out of ammo in the clip, the Triceraton takes a swing at me I dodge it and begin running *

"He's gonna get killed" said Don

*Thinking to self* Come on this guy is worse than The Executioner

"What is he doing" asked Mikey

"I have no idea Mikey but I think he's distracting the Triceraton" said Don

* I run towards a wall and run up it backflipping over the Triceraton and I slide behind it I run towards my weapons bag and grab my sawn-off shotguns, the Triceraton turns his head and sees me I run at him and I freeze the ground and slide under him using my first sawn-off shotgun I shoot upwards as I do making him fall to one knee I turn round and fire another shot with my second one blowing it's head off entirely,I twirl the shotgun and put it back in my weapons bag

"Well that was fun he was worse than The Executioner" I said turning my head

"Looks like there gone" said Raph

"Man I'm beat" I said while routating my shoulder

"Where did you learn that" asked Casey

"A movie called Resident Evil: Afterlife gotta love movies" I replied as I reload my guns

"We should head back home" said Leo

"Grant behind you" shouted Mikey and Don

* A Triceraton that I knocked down earlier gets up and without looking I shoot a Triceraton in the head

"Looks like I missed one my bad" I said turning my head

"We should check and see how many is dead" said Leo

"The ones without bullet holes or a stab wound won't be dead but I will fix that" I said summoning a fireball and lighting the corpses of the Triceratons on fire

We got back to the lair the guys thought it was strange that I barely flinched killing the Triceratons like I wasn't myself fighting them but I was fine

"Hey Grant are you feeling alright" said Mikey looking at me while I was polishing my weapons

"Yeah Mikey I'm fine burned alot of energy during that fight" I said with a smile

"So what's Resident Evil?" asked Mikey

"A Survival horror video game where you fight the undead and other creatures it's majorly cool" I replied

* I turn on the GameCube I brought from the fire all things I managed to save were able to work*

"Wanna watch" I asked putting in Resident Evil Remake

"Sure got nothing going on right now" said the turtles

* They sit and watch as I blast zombies into nothing and I beat the first disc

"What'd you think" I asked looking at the guys

"Awesome scare factor dude" said an impressed Mikey

"That Wesker guy is insane and I like it" said Raph

"So the Zombies,B.O.W's and that mansion was created by a company called Umbrella and the whole lot are creations by Umbrella" said Don

"Yup Donny everything was down to them" I said putting the game off

"So what's Wesker doing then does he know about it" asked Leo

"Yup he knows he's working for Umbrella at this time" I replied

"Man this game has it all cool characters and villains" said Mikey

* I yawn and put away the GameCube*

"Well I'm gonna get some sleep I'll see you guys in the morning" I said while sitting on the couch

"Alright see you tomorrow Grant" said the Turtles

I fell asleep and the next 2 months were basically fighting Purple Dragons and the occasional Foot Ninjas but not all them were tricky when I turned 18 in October it wasn't the usual birthdays you'd expect espcially Mikey annoying me and getting zapped by something Donny was working on but December was quiet and at the start of 2011 things got pretty difficult


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 Post subject: Re: [M] United By Fate
PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2011 8:47 pm 
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I FINALLY caught up, sorry it took me so long :cry: .
Nice power-trip fantasy, I like it! Some things don't quite make sense, but hey, this is Turtle world, not everything has to be explained :) . I especially like your weapons variety. I don't know much about guns though, so I tend to get a little lost :( .
The lack of punctuation makes this a little hard to read, but overall your story is enjoyable...good job! :)

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thanks :) and sorry about the punctuation whatever that means


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 Post subject: Re: [M] United By Fate
PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2011 11:07 pm 
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:lol: We discussed punctuation already! :roll:

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 Post subject: Re: [M] United By Fate
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it went out my head as soon as soon as I got back into Persona 4


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 Post subject: Re: [M] United By Fate
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yeah whatever that means
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